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PKMNaddictSora Dragon Tamer Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:57 am Posts: 102 Location: Floating around, not often here.	Crevice stared strangely at Todo, wondering why smashing into a gazillion pieces sounded like fun. Deciding that the suicune had the safest and less painful idea, Crevice followed her lead. _________________ Me, my pokemon, and I (Sapphire). Shinies: All from Diamond. Alchemy and Byrd, the twin Ponytas. Hope the Shinx.
Fri Nov 23, 2007 7:29 am

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	"What about here? Exploring this place might be fun. Besides, the worst that can happen is that we knock out a few more of those people (Yes, now he knows) when we escape", Omanyte said. He waited for awhile, then followed Aria's lead anyway. _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Sat Nov 24, 2007 10:09 am

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	Has my fanfic died already? _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:38 pm

PKMNaddictSora Dragon Tamer Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:57 am Posts: 102 Location: Floating around, not often here.	((I can't think of anything to say, but I'll try anyway.)) Crevice stopped suddenly and growled at a door, he didn't like the smell that was coming from it, it reminded him too much of something...he wasn't quite sure what. _________________ Me, my pokemon, and I (Sapphire). Shinies: All from Diamond. Alchemy and Byrd, the twin Ponytas. Hope the Shinx.
Thu Nov 29, 2007 9:47 am

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	Omanyte stopped as soon as the Vaporeon stopped; he had no idea what the Vaporeon was sniffing, as he had no nose. Then he remembered a trick that he had used underwater. He got into position, then rapidly blasted water at the door. Soon the little pipe was filling up, and they were submerged. The odour wafting from the door was compacted into bubbles; Omanyte now knew how they smelled as they popped. It smelled like another Pokémon; combustion; fusion; sparks; spikes. Before he knew it, the door collapsed, and the water was rapidly rushing out! _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:24 am

PKMNaddictSora Dragon Tamer Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:57 am Posts: 102 Location: Floating around, not often here.	Crevice yelped loudly as he was carried along by the rushing water, trying to get back into gear for swimming, he kicked his three working legs and used his tail. Thankfully, he quickly managed to keep himself from sinking. Crevice then looked around himself, still swimming, trying to spot any of the others. _________________ Me, my pokemon, and I (Sapphire). Shinies: All from Diamond. Alchemy and Byrd, the twin Ponytas. Hope the Shinx.
Mon Dec 03, 2007 4:20 pm

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	Very happy that at least he could spot at least one of his acquaintances, he hung from his suction tentacles to take a look. He saw what he had been smelling: a staticky, burn-smelling Jolteon! It was peering around intently, having missed him and the Vaporeon in his scanning gaze. Suddenly, from the order of one of the humans beside it, it Thunder-bolted the pipe-wall, making it a fitting niche. It pounced inside and let the static accumulate. _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Tue Dec 04, 2007 7:11 pm

PKMNaddictSora Dragon Tamer Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:57 am Posts: 102 Location: Floating around, not often here.	Crevice felt the hair on his back prickle at the smell of electricity. If there was one thing he hated almost as much as Mantines it was electrical pokemon. Diving under the water so not to be seen, he slowly swam loser to the Jolteon. Trying not to get seen or heard, he waited for the opportune moment to do whatever would be best to do. _________________ Me, my pokemon, and I (Sapphire). Shinies: All from Diamond. Alchemy and Byrd, the twin Ponytas. Hope the Shinx.
Thu Dec 06, 2007 4:04 pm

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	Are PKMNAddictSora and I the only members now? -+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+- Omanyte felt moderate pulses through body, as current surged weakly everywhere from the Jolteon. A plan burst into life as he saw the humans begin to walk away. He withdrew into his shell, and rapidly water-wheeled off the edge and THONK! went the collision. The Jolteon heard this audibly and became distracted dashing to the scientist's aid. Before he crash to the floor, Omanyte shouted to the Vaporeon, "NOW!" _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Sun Dec 09, 2007 9:08 am

PKMNaddictSora Dragon Tamer Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:57 am Posts: 102 Location: Floating around, not often here.	Yeah, I've been wondering that myself. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Acting solely on instinct, Crevice leaped out of the water and sunk his teeth into the Jolteon's back, growling loudly. Quickly, he closed his eyes to protect them from the flying sparks hitting his body. Crevice couldn't ever recall attacking another pokemon before, but it seemed the best option now. Tensely, he waited for the Jolteon to make a move. _________________ Me, my pokemon, and I (Sapphire). Shinies: All from Diamond. Alchemy and Byrd, the twin Ponytas. Hope the Shinx.
Sun Dec 09, 2007 9:27 am

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	Sigh... I'll try including someone else and see what happens... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Omanyte tumbled on the floor, once again paralyzing himself. He began having visions, visions of a dark awakening, a new revolution and the like. All vision almost darkened, he waited for the Eeveelutions' clash and how his other friends would help. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Subtle hint in the last sentence. _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:10 pm

icelblazer Pokemon Trainer Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 10:31 am Posts: 38	Re: Peril of the Ancients - Open elite42 wrote: author side note: Hmm... my fanfic about a Pokémon got destroyed because of Mary-sue-ness and lack of plot... let's see my try of hand here! ********************************************************** PLOT: Ancient Pokémon fight for survival in a world they once existed in eons ago. Nothing is the same... nor will it ever be again. ********************************************************* Info needed is: Age: Gender: (Alt+11 for Male, Alt+12 for Female, "#" for Genderless) Species: Sea Pokémon/Inanimate Object:P Alliance: Good/Bad Personality: Good Habits: Bad Habits: Born at: Dreams: Burdens: Any Companions: ********************************************************* Omanyte ? - Good About 125,000,000 years old... considered quite young by other Ancients Quite hasty, but courageous Thinks tactically Reckless and a bit fidgety Revived at Devon Co. and released near Sealed Chamber Has a great wish to be able to swim faster Heavy shell; his bad reputation as an "old thing" Remembers having made friends with neighbouring Anorith 125,000,000 yrs. ago ********************************************************* Rules: -No godmoding, powerplaying, overcontrol, mary-suing -You must a be a species of Pokémon that lives under the sea, or be an inanimate object waiting to be toyed with -If you're good, know that faults and succumbing to different factors is encouraged, as long it will flow with the story -If you're bad, know that you WILL be eventually defeated, but that you will always rise again (possibly to die again ) -You cannot make another character die. That person must be sensible enough to die when it's time, at which point they will be given the choice to be a fossil or an inanimate object -Don't suddenly sharply bend the plot... make it fluid. -You cannot choose a Pokémon species already chosen without good reason, or if you're a different gender. Even so, try to be a different species of Pokémon (you can still be pre-evolutions or evolutions) from everbody else *********************************************************** Character List Omanyte ? - 1.2510^8 yrs. - elite42 (ME!) Horsea ? named Spike* - 7 yrs. - RECOLORER Vaporeon ? named Crevice - 24 yrs. - PKMNAddictSora Ditto ? codenamed Aria - ??? - Kawaii Angel Totodile ? named Todo - 8 yrs. - Paco Characters still can join, but there will be a lesser chance as the storyline has begun. ************************************************************* The story has begun. Characters joining now will be pended. {piplup} named aquo male-Good age-10 personality- loves fighting good habits- good attack and defense bad habits- lazy and doesn't listen that much born at northern sea dream of being the strongest water type burdens-hated by almost all water types a mantine who follows him around and makes up for his weaknesses Edit: I'll just be evil _________________ made by Dark Typhlosion and click the sig Last edited by icelblazer on Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Fri Dec 28, 2007 11:50 am

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	Accepted! icelblazer, please include your starting paragraph on your scenario where you'll start off. Eventually (but smoothly) connect to the current story. _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Sat Dec 29, 2007 12:07 pm

icelblazer Pokemon Trainer Joined: Sun Oct 21, 2007 10:31 am Posts: 38	then suddenly the trainer sent out a piplup and said "now don't let them escape" so pilup did as he was told and froze all exites. Thinking who and why the pokemon were battling but followed orders. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ sorry I couldn't think of anything _________________ made by Dark Typhlosion and click the sig Last edited by icelblazer on Thu Feb 14, 2008 9:21 pm, edited 3 times in total.
Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:33 pm

elite42 Dragon Tamer Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:14 am Posts: 223 Location: I DON'T KNOW!! 9999999 Psybucks	Ummm.... well, it's part of the story, so fix your grammar. And do try to make it smoother... did you read the previous parts? It's important. _________________ The Meadow's End A new revived fanfic by me Come on and read its recent chapters! I'm motivated to continue if others are to read it~ Pokemon Diamond: Name: Quincy FC: 4553-8854-9459 The Rating Centre CAN'T be dead... can it??
Sat Dec 29, 2007 4:02 pm

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